Well I would like to be direct to the point that making other characters speech and action is quite a "boo" for me. It diminishes the excitement of anticipating what the other character should do or how would they react would what I or You have posted. As what Athentix said the chance of making offense to a person is greatly increase as more people join the forum.
Ex: "As - L - pass by he notice someone standing in the corner. The person happens to be Athentix and he was wiggling around drunk"
If it so happen that Athentix character doesn't want to be known as a drinker then that will be a problem.
More Example: "John was so madly inlove with Jenny"
Now thats way too obviously offensive.
It would be much better if it goes this way..
Ex: Person1: "- L - was walking alone in the canyon."
Person2 - > "Athentix was catching a mice in the canyon when all of a sudden
he came across a man wandering around the canyon"
Ex2: Person1: "Jenny asked John on what he thinks about him"
Person2: "Jenny asked John on what he thinks about him. John answered "Are you
insane? then followed "You didn't notice that I'm madly inlove with you"
So its up to you guys to think which one is much preferable^^
- L -